Story
Eclipse of Ashes
Chapter 1: "When Ash Falls"
Page 2 (Black & White Manga)
Page Layout
7 Panels
Panel 1 (Large Top Panel)
Kael remains standing on the edge of the ruined observation tower from the previous page.
The wind blows his long black coat behind him while ash drifts across the sky. Below him stretches a vast landscape of ruined cities, broken highways, and forests overtaken by black crystal growths.
The enormous crimson eclipse dominates the horizon.
Narration
Every morning...
The world remembers what it lost.
Panel 2
Close-up of Kael's boot stepping off the cracked stone ledge.
Small pieces of rock tumble into the fog far below.
SFX
...CRK...
Panel 3
Kael walks through the abandoned ruins.
Broken vehicles sit half-buried beneath layers of ash.
An old traffic light hangs crooked above a deserted street.
Nature has begun reclaiming the city, with vines and black crystals growing over shattered buildings.
Kael keeps one hand inside his coat pocket while calmly scanning his surroundings.
Kael (Thought)
Too quiet...
Panel 4
A close-up of Kael's crimson eye.
It narrows slightly.
He has sensed something.
In the background, faint movement is barely visible between the ruined buildings.
SFX
...rustle...
Panel 5
A narrow alleyway between collapsed structures.
Several pairs of glowing white eyes slowly appear within the darkness.
Twisted silhouettes begin emerging from the shadows.
Ashborn.
Their bodies are thin, cracked, and constantly shedding ash.
Some crawl on all fours.
Others stagger forward unnaturally.
SFX
...GRRRR...
...SKREEEE...
Panel 6
A wider shot reveals nearly a dozen Ashborn surrounding the street.
Kael stops walking.
He doesn't panic.
His expression remains calm and unreadable.
His coat gently sways as ash falls around him.
Ashborn
GHHH...
RAAAH...
Kael (Thought)
Twelve...
No...
Thirteen.
Panel 7 (Large Bottom Panel – Cliffhanger)
Behind Kael, an enormous Ashborn—twice the height of the others—slowly rises from the rubble of a collapsed building.
Its body is covered in jagged black crystal spikes.
Its glowing eyes lock onto Kael.
The creature lets out a deafening roar that echoes through the ruined city.
Kael doesn't turn around.
He simply closes his eyes for a brief moment.
SFX (Large Text)
ROOOOOOOOAAAAARRR!!
Kael
...So you're the leader.
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